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Heartless
I had a heart I wouldn’t let anyone see,
Until you cut me open and took it away from me.
You sewed me back together with a goodbye kiss,
With a hole in my chest,
It’s my heart I miss
Until you cut me open and took it away from me.
You sewed me back together with a goodbye kiss,
With a hole in my chest,
It’s my heart I miss
Published 20th Feb 2018
| Edited 28th Mar 2018
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23rd Feb 2018 4:39pm
I liked the form...rhyme...the sentiment...your heart is still where it always is else how could you write these words...keep on rhyming....
28th Mar 2018 00:19am
Wow, this expresses well the heartache one feels when two lovers part or one in betrayed. In the second to last line did you mean to say "hole." Brava!
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Anonymous
5th Apr 2020 3:46pm
Very beautifully written. A lot said in few words.
2nd Aug 2021 2:46am
The pain that others can't see and feel
Makes it seem like that pain doesn't exist
This just makes it worse for the one who is suffering
Because people don't understand what they do not see, hear, smell, taste and touch
Wounds and scars that are invisible to mere mortals
Either are not understood or have an unacknowledged and unaccepted presence
Makes it seem like that pain doesn't exist
This just makes it worse for the one who is suffering
Because people don't understand what they do not see, hear, smell, taste and touch
Wounds and scars that are invisible to mere mortals
Either are not understood or have an unacknowledged and unaccepted presence
