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copernicus
flood of starlight
like detrimental fog
let it burn my eyes to a crisp
be it god
be it a hole in the sky
my dreamscape cognition
first there was asphyxia
and then there was
night sky
we rely on sight
to ascertain
but the problem is
we are still learning how to use
our eyes.
like detrimental fog
let it burn my eyes to a crisp
be it god
be it a hole in the sky
my dreamscape cognition
first there was asphyxia
and then there was
night sky
we rely on sight
to ascertain
but the problem is
we are still learning how to use
our eyes.
Published 30th Jan 2018
| Edited 28th May 2022
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21st Nov 2020 6:42pm
So I think what draws me to your work is your night sky/celestial imagery. You weave it in and out of your pieces so very well.
