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Visitation
Line Up Here
Hoards of tourists
Invade the past
Relics
Remembered
Reshaped
Rehashed
Restored
Resound
Where ghosts abound
And trash is discarded
All around
As the present is lost
The future is found
With expectation
Of new kings crowned
If you don't find this funny
Then stand your ground
Or buy your ticket
Beforehand
To be right on the money
Published 25th Dec 2017
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26th Dec 2017 5:03am
We humans are so attracted to "Ancient Relics"...there must be some truth hidden in them somewhere...
Great poetry David.
Cheers...Harry
Great poetry David.
Cheers...Harry
26th Dec 2017 9:26am
Artifacts depress me for some reason, Harry. Maybe because they represent something lost forever or it's because of what they might reveal upon further investigation. Anyway, I don't do flea markets for all the treasures they might hold. Perhaps I just don't want my past to catch up with me.
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1st Jan 2018 8:40am
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1st Jan 2018 5:04pm
Thank you gp....I really appreciate your comment. My preferred paradigm is that every moment exists in the present in different vibrational (sic) states. Hence we can perceive our past lives and experience premonitions as they all occur simultaneously. I'm a bit obsessed with this subject. :)
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2nd Jan 2018 4:44am
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2nd Jan 2018 6:14am
I'd love to continue this discussion, my email is davidmepsted@yahoo.com. Hate to say I have no other messaging tech skills. Thanks for commenting.
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2nd Jan 2018 7:48am
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