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Peace

anticipation, revelation
can you read my mind

I can feel the ebb and flow
of waves of thought in time

when you're thinking
I am thinking, concentrating too

more than through the internet
I am linked with you

can you feel the way that I feel
when I'm feeling you

I know you can feel something
different and new

the emptiness that's in between us
is charged when we connect

thoughts and feelings interweaving
consciousness erect

penetrating both our fates in
moments we're released

can you feel me when I feel you
I am feeling peace
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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