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Emptied of Heart
Isolated in the strumming of time
Holographic visions of memories visualize
Amnesiac of presence
Ticks and Tocks of clocks silence the room
Everything is gone...no holly nor jolly
You were the only worthwhile, within my worthless
Our paradised love... fulfilled the meaning
Underestimated how much I'd care
Joked how feelings are troublesome
Sorrowed heart seemed it'd never be
Recovery is impossible
Anger won't catch your attention
My love... we were so perfect
Trials of love, we couldn't win the court
Now I serve my sentence for wronging my dignity
Holographic visions of memories visualize
Amnesiac of presence
Ticks and Tocks of clocks silence the room
Everything is gone...no holly nor jolly
You were the only worthwhile, within my worthless
Our paradised love... fulfilled the meaning
Underestimated how much I'd care
Joked how feelings are troublesome
Sorrowed heart seemed it'd never be
Recovery is impossible
Anger won't catch your attention
My love... we were so perfect
Trials of love, we couldn't win the court
Now I serve my sentence for wronging my dignity
Published 8th Dec 2017
| Edited 9th Dec 2017
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8th Dec 2017 9:58pm
i buried a metal file in this cake so you can break out of your prison.
8th Dec 2017 10:02pm
LOL!
Oh dear Prometheus! Your amazing sweetness of clever words has left me to giggle and smile in joy!
Thank you so much...
Now I all I need is to learn how to pick a lock...
Will you teach me?
Great appreciations to your time :)
Love
H
Oh dear Prometheus! Your amazing sweetness of clever words has left me to giggle and smile in joy!
Thank you so much...
Now I all I need is to learn how to pick a lock...
Will you teach me?
Great appreciations to your time :)
Love
H
9th Dec 2017 00:23am
buddha is the lock pick and is already in you. yes i can teach you, but you dont need me.
8th Dec 2017 11:49pm
The Weight of sorrow hangs over the ink
like a boulder, squashing a heart...deep, empassioned inkletting...
like a boulder, squashing a heart...deep, empassioned inkletting...
9th Dec 2017 00:17am
why thank-you dear poet! :]
Glad you feel in my works!
grateful for your visit :]
Love
H
Glad you feel in my works!
grateful for your visit :]
Love
H
11th Dec 2017 6:33am
deep hearted....I love the trade off swing in the rhythm...very nice...that type is pleasing to read...it balances...
much love
Jeff
much love
Jeff
11th Dec 2017 8:20pm
I'm glad you see depth within my works...!
Thank you very much for your kindness to my piece :)
Love
H
Thank you very much for your kindness to my piece :)
Love
H
11th Dec 2017 7:57pm
It's like a washing machine full of angry Love with a dessert touch of Christmas,AND time traveling guitar players of the heart.
the words bitter sweet comes to mind.
good writing SourMelon
the words bitter sweet comes to mind.
good writing SourMelon
11th Dec 2017 8:21pm
Your beautiful words to my work of words , bring such warmth and fuzziness to my heart! :)
Thank you so very much for your lovely visit..
Love
H
Thank you so very much for your lovely visit..
Love
H
13th Dec 2017 6:43am
I love your holographic design where each line begins with an initial message. A genetic code embedded within language resembles my own take on things (not to bring myself into this). Just thought I'd mention it. The silence of the ticking clocks....always makes me crazy.
13th Dec 2017 11:36pm
Thank you so much! :)
I greatly appreciate your lovely words and comment upon my works..
<3
H
I greatly appreciate your lovely words and comment upon my works..
<3
H
Anonymous
9th Jan 2018 11:48pm
Now I serve my sentence for wronging my dignity
a powerful conclusion
excellent write, very meaningful
a powerful conclusion
excellent write, very meaningful
10th Jan 2018 00:43am
