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Don't Deny My Vibes...
Don’t Deny My Vibes…
I wanna vibe with you
But you want your vibe left alone
Can’t we jus sip wine and share our favorite songs
Empty the bottle till it’s all gone
I wanna drown in your intellectual ocean
Feel your every motion
Have I got the wrong notion?
Is this too much emotion?
I know there’s so much you can show me
There’s so much I wanna see
I see it all so clear
Each time you look at me
No higher high, No greater thrill
But you shut me down with a winter chill
Brutal... Like an unexpected bill
Like going into battle with no shield
Are you testing my will?
Hoping I’ll just yield
Jus give me a second or a minute
To keep your attention
Give me an hour or two
To show my point of view
Give me one night or one day
I think you’ll be okay
A week or a month
If you haven’t had enough
And if we make it through a year
And you see that I’m sincere
You’d see that the vibe was there
Don’t let escape something so rare
So if you let down your guard and your caution subsides
We could be great, if you jus don’t deny my Vibes
I wanna vibe with you
But you want your vibe left alone
Can’t we jus sip wine and share our favorite songs
Empty the bottle till it’s all gone
I wanna drown in your intellectual ocean
Feel your every motion
Have I got the wrong notion?
Is this too much emotion?
I know there’s so much you can show me
There’s so much I wanna see
I see it all so clear
Each time you look at me
No higher high, No greater thrill
But you shut me down with a winter chill
Brutal... Like an unexpected bill
Like going into battle with no shield
Are you testing my will?
Hoping I’ll just yield
Jus give me a second or a minute
To keep your attention
Give me an hour or two
To show my point of view
Give me one night or one day
I think you’ll be okay
A week or a month
If you haven’t had enough
And if we make it through a year
And you see that I’m sincere
You’d see that the vibe was there
Don’t let escape something so rare
So if you let down your guard and your caution subsides
We could be great, if you jus don’t deny my Vibes
Published 6th Dec 2017
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6th Dec 2017 10:35pm
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6th Dec 2017 10:50pm
is it so much to ask, to jus make a simple connection,
to jus live in the moment..for a moment
but im guilty of denying vibes myself but you gotta see things from both sides for growth...
thank you for reading
to jus live in the moment..for a moment
but im guilty of denying vibes myself but you gotta see things from both sides for growth...
thank you for reading
7th Dec 2017 12:39pm
I'm thinking, oh yea bro. You got her...no worries, she can't deny your vibes not when you spill such fluid emotional impact, n flow...Nah she won't deny you bro! :)
8th Dec 2017 9:35pm
it happens more often then not lol....
but rejection is a part of life , i have a old friend who always says " moments like that builds character" lol
and trust me I stay building
but rejection is a part of life , i have a old friend who always says " moments like that builds character" lol
and trust me I stay building
8th Dec 2017 8:21pm
I hope she doesn't deny your vibes!
You've written so beautifully about your care..
"I wanna drown in your intellectual ocean
Feel your every motion
Have I got the wrong notion?
Is this too much emotion? "
I feel your struggle so perfectly clear here
Nice work!
Love
H
You've written so beautifully about your care..
"I wanna drown in your intellectual ocean
Feel your every motion
Have I got the wrong notion?
Is this too much emotion? "
I feel your struggle so perfectly clear here
Nice work!
Love
H
8th Dec 2017 9:41pm
I always try to write from a reflective and yet universal place, so that these are not jus my stories and emotions but could be any and everyone's
thanks for reading :)
thanks for reading :)
Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 11:40pm
If she denies these kinda vibes then she ain’t it lol.
Great write :)
Great write :)
15th Dec 2017 10:29pm
being denied keeps me hopeful and keeps my curiosity feed...thanks for reading
19th Dec 2017 5:28pm
My favourite poem on here i've read so far!
Something down to earth and sweet about the way you approach a women who isn't instantly open to you. Words of hope. Thumbs up!
Something down to earth and sweet about the way you approach a women who isn't instantly open to you. Words of hope. Thumbs up!
21st Dec 2017 9:50pm
I always try to keep it positive when it comes to taking chances with romance until proven otherwise.
thanks for reading ...glad you enjoyed :)
thanks for reading ...glad you enjoyed :)
19th Oct 2018 10:54pm
"Are you testing my will hoping I'll just yield?"
I think most women can relate to that more than you know. This is dope
I think most women can relate to that more than you know. This is dope
19th Oct 2018 11:15pm
2nd Dec 2018 11:06pm
So if you let down your guard and your caution subsides
We could be great, if you jus don’t deny my Vibes
This line says everything I have been trying to convey recently yet couldn't articulate!
We could be great, if you jus don’t deny my Vibes
This line says everything I have been trying to convey recently yet couldn't articulate!
3rd Dec 2018 5:07pm
thats why we're here your fellow poets always have words or a way to say what you are trying to.
the way we are its growing harder to make a connection we're all so guarded or we just misinterpret someone intent...but we keep trying
the way we are its growing harder to make a connection we're all so guarded or we just misinterpret someone intent...but we keep trying
