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Gen XXX
How great the mantle
cast upon our generation
heat cloaking - choking closed throats
tied in full windsor vipers
Broiling beneath our husks
mindless magma melts
in double portions of demerit
claws couched in our thawing crust
How deep delves this dissolution...
lust?
Dubbed by darkness
we have naught
but to coil and cuddle
in self-imposed
cutting-edge cobwebs
of distrust
waiting...
unsated bait
with wet limbs quaking for asylum's thrust
Published 22nd Nov 2017
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22nd Nov 2017 7:04pm
22nd Nov 2017 7:18pm
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
22nd Nov 2017 8:53pm
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22nd Nov 2017 9:14pm
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
22nd Nov 2017 10:16pm
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22nd Nov 2017 10:20pm
I retract my apology, I got my poem up before yours 😉😆
But that's a fair point. Airtight.
But that's a fair point. Airtight.
23rd Nov 2017 00:23am
ok! this one lost me - not that hard to do - but you know me and the opera analogy - I read this out loud three times and it is beautiful - I just didn't get it's meaning :-)))))
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2018 2:50pm
Interesting thoughts on humanity, although not totally sure what to suggest as a theme! I'll have to pass on that part. Have a blessed holiday season.
24th Dec 2018 4:49am
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2018 2:50pm
Interesting thoughts on humanity, although not totally sure what to suggest as a theme! I'll have to pass on that part. Have a blessed holiday season.
