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Repunzel
I want to see you
There's nothing to see
Al these comprami$es
Have hidden what was something to me
I want to hold you
There is no hand in reach
All these faces,and I'm not recognized by anybody
Your opening statement
Has traces of a search for more than"it could be"
Repunzel,Repunzel
Let down your hair
I need your kind of woman,to take care of me
A softer you
A battle scared me
A world of maybe's.
© 2017 Jermaine Van Rooyen
There's nothing to see
Al these comprami$es
Have hidden what was something to me
I want to hold you
There is no hand in reach
All these faces,and I'm not recognized by anybody
Your opening statement
Has traces of a search for more than"it could be"
Repunzel,Repunzel
Let down your hair
I need your kind of woman,to take care of me
A softer you
A battle scared me
A world of maybe's.
© 2017 Jermaine Van Rooyen
Published 21st Nov 2017
| Edited 25th Nov 2017
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- Edited 11th Feb 2021 11:45am
22nd Nov 2017 6:49am
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22nd Nov 2017 12:19pm
Thank u for your honesty,even the mispelled or words lacking an extra letter in its own language of what words mean and gramaticly corectness has its place,Repunzel is a multilayerd artwork,that has a fairytale innocent childlike hope playing in the background...I appreciate your comment.
