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I wish
Everything I say,
Isn't enough to make you stay,
And then I remembered,
You were never mine anyway
Isn't enough to make you stay,
And then I remembered,
You were never mine anyway
Published 17th Nov 2017
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17th Nov 2017 2:29am
17th Nov 2017 3:10am
18th Nov 2017 2:10am
beautifully sad micro poem - I enjoyed the original way you wrote this :-)))
I love this...
So many emotions, even though it's written in short length...
So sad..
Nicely done :)
-H-
So many emotions, even though it's written in short length...
So sad..
Nicely done :)
-H-
21st Nov 2017 6:55pm
"You were never mine anyway" this line creates untold pain ... Good poem 👍
