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Once
Once, there was a smiling and bubbly girl who takes everything positively.
Now, there's this girl who look at the ceiling and calculate the feeling of hanging.
Now, there's this girl who look at the ceiling and calculate the feeling of hanging.
Published 16th Nov 2017
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17th Nov 2017 8:19am
18th Nov 2017 4:02am
18th Nov 2017 2:19am
I love this despite its conclusion - excellent pies of writing though :-))))
18th Nov 2017 4:02am
21st Nov 2017 7:01pm
Happy beginning and sad ending I can feel this poem lurking right into my soul .. very impressive ink 👍
