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im not human
Im a fallen angel. I fell from the sky. the left me with sigh.
I see with glass eyes. the haze leaves me with doubt.
I wonder what happens when the earth turns to ashes. I feel numbness. I feel no warmth anymore.
your drawing me closer to this comma.
is it your fault that ghost's don't float from ages of hurt
Ill soak in this bath, naked and empty.
you have left me with nothing but my memories
ill rot in hell with a picture in my hand.
of you naked and burning
I see with glass eyes. the haze leaves me with doubt.
I wonder what happens when the earth turns to ashes. I feel numbness. I feel no warmth anymore.
your drawing me closer to this comma.
is it your fault that ghost's don't float from ages of hurt
Ill soak in this bath, naked and empty.
you have left me with nothing but my memories
ill rot in hell with a picture in my hand.
of you naked and burning
Published 17th Sep 2011
| Edited 30th Sep 2011
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17th Sep 2011 10:46pm
I enjoyed reading how quick and to the point it is. It creates strong imagery for me. Great intensity!
19th Sep 2011 3:03am
9th Dec 2011 2:54am
14th Dec 2013 1:41am
Very well written it begins with heaven and ends with hell. That's do stellar :)
