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Eat my heart first won’t you
Even you’re cigarette smoke
tastes
as sweet
as you look
you’re twice
as deadly
than a Stephen King book
hooking in your claws
dragging off to feed
i may only scream a little
but you like it when i bleed
sinking in your teeth
tearing of the skin from bone
it hurts less than this pain
that you’ve left me here and all alone
tastes
as sweet
as you look
you’re twice
as deadly
than a Stephen King book
hooking in your claws
dragging off to feed
i may only scream a little
but you like it when i bleed
sinking in your teeth
tearing of the skin from bone
it hurts less than this pain
that you’ve left me here and all alone
Published 27th Oct 2017
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27th Oct 2017 7:01pm
Anonymous
27th Oct 2017 9:29pm
Same thing I said.
Except, I like your expression better.
Heart swooning in a abyss
Except, I like your expression better.
Heart swooning in a abyss
17th Jan 2018 10:56am
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17th Jan 2018 8:36pm
If u start at the eyes then you can't see. But the heart well that's another story. Your archives? I dug through nothing love. Do tell
17th Jan 2018 8:42pm
I love when anyone digs past a week previous for poems in my work;it gives me a chance to reflect on days past, and thoughts not forgotten but dormant. Always a good feeling
17th Jan 2018 9:51pm
Well it helps to understand mindset and point of view. You were gone anyway. Dont hate
