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the blade
This blade is going to cut
Going to cut strait through me
Hope it hurts hope it gives me pain
Hope I can feel all my sorrow
I start to see all my blood flow out
Now I feel dizzy
Falling to the ground
A teacher sees me on the ground
They quickly rush me to the hospital
I was renounced dead
Going to cut strait through me
Hope it hurts hope it gives me pain
Hope I can feel all my sorrow
I start to see all my blood flow out
Now I feel dizzy
Falling to the ground
A teacher sees me on the ground
They quickly rush me to the hospital
I was renounced dead
Published 16th Sep 2011
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2011 7:23pm
a sad poem hope this is your muse none of us really wont to die
16th Sep 2011 9:07pm
Dark poem, and that is why it is here, right? I have read much ion the subject of cutting. Your poem, and this line, "Hope I can feel all my sorrow" explained more to me than any scholar could. If this is a real-time situation for you, fight through it. Life is good.
Anonymous
17th Sep 2011 00:44am
When there is fear, there is pain, and when there is pain there is lonliness. But there is also one thing that erase them all. Strength!
Strength that can help us believe, that we can get through it...
Keep up the awesome writing darls, and that what you wrote me, shows great strength :-D
Strength that can help us believe, that we can get through it...
Keep up the awesome writing darls, and that what you wrote me, shows great strength :-D
18th Sep 2011 00:14am
