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Many Souls
Many Souls
I feel my inner self grow
My insides starting to bloom
I must reap seeds I've sown
Within me, my many personalities take control
I can't juggle another soul
I take them in, they spit me out
All these entities, are trapped inside
My personality, no longer reside
One's a witch and another a bitch
All I do know is they won't leave
They've taken over, where I once belonged
They continue to grow very strong
Everyday they push me deeper
If they don't leave soon I'm going to meet the reaper
Taking over my body and my mind is a ruin
Look deep inside, tell me what you see
I'll promise you it's not me
Chelley Bean Poetess
I feel my inner self grow
My insides starting to bloom
I must reap seeds I've sown
Within me, my many personalities take control
I can't juggle another soul
I take them in, they spit me out
All these entities, are trapped inside
My personality, no longer reside
One's a witch and another a bitch
All I do know is they won't leave
They've taken over, where I once belonged
They continue to grow very strong
Everyday they push me deeper
If they don't leave soon I'm going to meet the reaper
Taking over my body and my mind is a ruin
Look deep inside, tell me what you see
I'll promise you it's not me
Chelley Bean Poetess
Published 18th Oct 2017
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6th Nov 2017 9:01pm
Dark and (to me) one of the scariest subjects. I can relate to the many souls one vessel aspect of this tale.
A tap dancing trio of stubborn and very loud women. Ah! the noise they can make. Try to find the middle ground between them and you might not meet the dastardly (and quite handsome) Reaper.
The rhyme of this was awesome, but it zigged where it should have zagged for rhythm. Maybe breaking up some lines could help? It's powerful regardless.
Fantastic poem, thanks for sharing :)
E.
A tap dancing trio of stubborn and very loud women. Ah! the noise they can make. Try to find the middle ground between them and you might not meet the dastardly (and quite handsome) Reaper.
The rhyme of this was awesome, but it zigged where it should have zagged for rhythm. Maybe breaking up some lines could help? It's powerful regardless.
Fantastic poem, thanks for sharing :)
E.
7th Nov 2017 2:57am
Thank you so much for your invaluable feedback. Yes the inner souls that inhabit me can be bothersome however writing is very theraputic. Many thanks Chelley!
P.S Thanks for the add on reading list!
P.S Thanks for the add on reading list!
