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The Seasons of Love
I never knew how green it would make me, the seasons of love.
until I felt the warmth of your hand and my flowers blooming under your touch.
there was nothing like it and like a desperate honeybee i wanted more..
But slowly we realized we were no longer blooming.
Shocked and stunned we went into fall colder than ever.
The leaves have fell twice since then and both times I haven't seen you.
I used to cry but now I am comforted in the winter by the warmth of another.
If you wanted me you would have fell with me, and we would have gotten up stronger than ever but that season has already passed hasn't it?
until I felt the warmth of your hand and my flowers blooming under your touch.
there was nothing like it and like a desperate honeybee i wanted more..
But slowly we realized we were no longer blooming.
Shocked and stunned we went into fall colder than ever.
The leaves have fell twice since then and both times I haven't seen you.
I used to cry but now I am comforted in the winter by the warmth of another.
If you wanted me you would have fell with me, and we would have gotten up stronger than ever but that season has already passed hasn't it?
Published 11th Oct 2017
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11th Oct 2017 3:36am
Such a complicated situation to have deal with, but hey sounds like you came out the other side ok...
11th Oct 2017 3:38am
11th Oct 2017 4:08am
The metaphors used here fit nicely with the theme.
That you have passed to the next season, shows your strength and stamina.
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That you have passed to the next season, shows your strength and stamina.
Welcome to the DUP
11th Oct 2017 10:07am
"Shocked and stunned, we went into Fall colder than ever," as everyone else has pointed out, the metaphors here are wonderful. Loved the piece.
11th Oct 2017 3:28pm
"But slowly we realized we were no longer blooming.
Shocked and stunned we went into fall colder than ever." I loved this line! This is a great poem!
Shocked and stunned we went into fall colder than ever." I loved this line! This is a great poem!
11th Oct 2017 7:21pm
You convey the message beautifully through your use of metaphors, a very enjoyable read. There is beauty in every season. Welcome to DUP!
- Fairy
- Fairy
14th Oct 2017 7:35pm
excellent poem of loves struggles - love never comes easy - I really enjoyed this :-)
Like Much! :-)
Like Much! :-)
