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And Another Thing or Two
I Live In A Town Full of Ingrates
Filled the tank on the car last Thursday knowing
if I waited the price would go up next day.
Now, it's 11 cents cheaper,
and no one has called to thank me.
or Two
I never have a cigarette while
driving around, even if by myself
without cracking a window or two,
cause
they say second-hand smoke will kill you.
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Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 6:10am
lol! them ingrates! should we shootem?
p.s. don't ride a car with me (I think you are liable to shoot me)
p.s. don't ride a car with me (I think you are liable to shoot me)
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Re: Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 6:32am
Two short poems, spirited to life through casual chatting with spouse while on our way to dinner. One never knows when silliness will come knocking. "shootem" :) perhaps with "leaded" gas? :-) Always enjoy your visits and words. Thanks, Oxy
Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 7:41am
As a non-smoker who has felt trapped in the box of a car with a smoker on numerous occasions, I probably shouldn't mention how many times I wished that smoke would choke the person making me breathe their toxic exhale. But since smokers also breathe in their own second hand smoke and then whatever's left after I exhale it, making it third hand smoke, I get a little bit of satisfaction knowing how they will die... jj
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Re: Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 7:56am
I can certainly relate to what you have said. Being now a non-smoker, I always considered others when I did smoke and would not do so in their presents when 2nd hand smoke was an issue. And, I will add, the smell of smoke in their cars or on clothes now stinks to me. I suppose a small downside to quitting. Thanks for the visit and words. AT
Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 10:16am
The expression
conveys flashes
of a kind
considerate soul.
And a lovely human.
being
a poet.
conveys flashes
of a kind
considerate soul.
And a lovely human.
being
a poet.
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Thank you for the two wonderful gifts
you have bestowed upon my work here.
And for the manner they arrived.
you have bestowed upon my work here.
And for the manner they arrived.
Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 6:20pm
I live in a similar place (lol) - I gave up smoking a year ago - not for health reasons, more like financial the cigarettes I smoked are nearly £10:00 per pack and I was smoking two packs a day - I'll let you do the math (lol)
I really enjoyed this it sparked my grey matter today :-)
I really enjoyed this it sparked my grey matter today :-)
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Re: Re. And Another Thing or Two
Thank You David, I'm glad to have been able to return a favor as to "sparking the gray matter" for you do so for many others as well. The fuel poem is but a humorous thought on a matter of miscalculation that happens more frequently to me than I care to think about :-) as I'm sure others experience also.
A year is a great achievement. I quit some years ago for 4 months but found an old pack lying around and thought "Just one won't hurt" BIG BIG mistake. So, now I am trying again. Prices here are about half what you said, and although the savings brought by quitting is nice, my reasons are health related.
Thanks so much for stopping by, a pleasure much enjoyed my friend
A year is a great achievement. I quit some years ago for 4 months but found an old pack lying around and thought "Just one won't hurt" BIG BIG mistake. So, now I am trying again. Prices here are about half what you said, and although the savings brought by quitting is nice, my reasons are health related.
Thanks so much for stopping by, a pleasure much enjoyed my friend
Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 6:23pm
dearest poetess this gave me such a giggle :)
you are truly clever & a beautiful soul..
~Raven
you are truly clever & a beautiful soul..
~Raven
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Re: Re. And Another Thing or Two
9th Oct 2017 7:36pm
Thank you Raven. I feel one needs to see the humor in things we do and the silly side of life. That you too saw it, gives me happy thoughts as well.
Thanks for visiting, and on a 2nd note, my friends call my Teri, amongst other things which is an entirely write in and by itself. :-)
Please take care.
Thanks for visiting, and on a 2nd note, my friends call my Teri, amongst other things which is an entirely write in and by itself. :-)
Please take care.
Re. And Another Thing or Two
12th Oct 2017 3:53pm
The fact that you have even considered putting a window down, while with another
possibly inhaling unwanted smoke makes u a grade a person in my eyes...hate smoking...well, unless it's weed lol that's not an annoying odor lol
possibly inhaling unwanted smoke makes u a grade a person in my eyes...hate smoking...well, unless it's weed lol that's not an annoying odor lol
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Re: Re. And Another Thing or Two
12th Oct 2017 4:14pm
LMAO, "annoying odor" lol, yep, been there though many years ago. I didn't wait to breath it in, sucking it outta their nose was better. :-) Thanks for the smiles, Poe, luv it.