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the hell?
today i was at the park, on the swing, lost in thought and my music... then this guy came up to me, that i know from school.. he handed me a knife and told me to slit my throat, so he could lick the blood off my body and fuck my corpse.. i took the knife and left.. the knife is now in my wall.. but what the hell? why does every guy i know, hand me something sharp, and tell me to kill myself?
Published 12th Sep 2011
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12th Sep 2011 00:57am
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12th Sep 2011 10:22pm
14th Sep 2011 5:02am
Not many poets are brave enough to write something quite so honest.
It has an almost black humour to it, very earnest, and far from shy.
I think that's what any good poet warrants.
I'll give this one a 'like'.
It has an almost black humour to it, very earnest, and far from shy.
I think that's what any good poet warrants.
I'll give this one a 'like'.
14th Sep 2011 9:49pm
17th Sep 2011 6:14pm
I dont dislike the writing though what it says I find controversial and somewhat bothersome.
I'm sorry to hear of your life at school. People now-a-days are freaks. Especially kids at school. I hope only that you never follow their unsound advice. I'd kind of like to know theres one more poet in the world
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Sincerly A Nameless Traveler
I'm sorry to hear of your life at school. People now-a-days are freaks. Especially kids at school. I hope only that you never follow their unsound advice. I'd kind of like to know theres one more poet in the world
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Sincerly A Nameless Traveler
17th Sep 2011 6:21pm
17th Sep 2011 6:38pm
I think even if I were to tell you you've probably already heard it all before...
Please dont listen to the freaks of this world though thats all I ask well that and never ever stop writing! Its medicinal! Really...
Please dont listen to the freaks of this world though thats all I ask well that and never ever stop writing! Its medicinal! Really...
17th Sep 2011 9:04pm
i try not too, but ive been letting it all roll off my back these past years with out care.... its just now starting to break me.. i wont stop writing... i have many poems that i havent posted yet....
