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The Chase
I begin the day afraid to wake pushing sleep to its limits
knowing that once i wake up the chase is just beginning
I fight the urge and need to stand or else my feet will falter
daddy's strong he can win i tell my baby daughter
As it hits and my will goes out my feet begin to muster
my drive is crack the one that snaps the high is like no other
when i find it her price is high because i push it to the edge
I'm a hyper child with a life of pain i convince myself in head
Its okay to break the code of trust for a high that lasts a minute
its the chase that destroys the love for life and it starts when you are finished........
knowing that once i wake up the chase is just beginning
I fight the urge and need to stand or else my feet will falter
daddy's strong he can win i tell my baby daughter
As it hits and my will goes out my feet begin to muster
my drive is crack the one that snaps the high is like no other
when i find it her price is high because i push it to the edge
I'm a hyper child with a life of pain i convince myself in head
Its okay to break the code of trust for a high that lasts a minute
its the chase that destroys the love for life and it starts when you are finished........
Published 3rd Sep 2011
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13th Nov 2011 9:48pm
Ur style is cool and staright - Is it okay to break the code of trust for a 1 min high? what if the trust is complete n honest - is it okay to break that? Is everyone just a mark or a stair to the high that never last never breaks joy or freedom. Can u break the code if that trust is someone who loves u and opens all they r and have with u?
Ur poem is truth _ I kno this feeling. The day is ticking hr after hr trying to do rt thing - i count all the hrs i did it rt and few that r a bust. lossing it all incl my dignity 4 a moment in bliss. is the chase still destroying love for life as u wrote in last line
Ur poem is truth _ I kno this feeling. The day is ticking hr after hr trying to do rt thing - i count all the hrs i did it rt and few that r a bust. lossing it all incl my dignity 4 a moment in bliss. is the chase still destroying love for life as u wrote in last line
4th Feb 2012 7:33am
It cuts deep like a blade and bleeds with power. It gives off a sense of sorrow in the air. It speaks to me ,makes me wonder…while yet giving me such insight. Thank u.
