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Lovers
Laura dressed elegantly
because she liked it
hose and heels and little black dresses
because he liked it
Laura flirted
because she liked it
that smile, that look
because he liked it
She teased him till he took her
because she liked it
He laughed with her
dancing amid the flirting
because he liked it
And love and live they did
because they liked it
What’s your story?
because she liked it
hose and heels and little black dresses
because he liked it
Laura flirted
because she liked it
that smile, that look
because he liked it
She teased him till he took her
because she liked it
He laughed with her
dancing amid the flirting
because he liked it
And love and live they did
because they liked it
What’s your story?
Published 13th Jun 2017
| Edited 16th Jan 2019
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13th Jun 2017 3:19pm
just exquisite lovers, Laura & that guy;
what glory, if every story were a love story...
what glory, if every story were a love story...
Thank you John.
And yes, what if?
Smiles, it seems to dovetail with the "I Love You" poem.
And yes, what if?
Smiles, it seems to dovetail with the "I Love You" poem.
16th Jan 2019 7:52pm
Of course as earlier said not all can be love poems. But this one certainly could. And I like and liked it too!
