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If You Know What I Mean
Morning dew falls in the valley
Glistening in its passionate glory
Begging travelers to taste its fruit
Ripe and ready to be eaten
Sultry summer winds carry the sweetest aroma
Enticing the first bite
The flesh is tender and moist
Its flavor dances on the tongue
Succulent sweet sustenance
I could eat a peach all day
Glistening in its passionate glory
Begging travelers to taste its fruit
Ripe and ready to be eaten
Sultry summer winds carry the sweetest aroma
Enticing the first bite
The flesh is tender and moist
Its flavor dances on the tongue
Succulent sweet sustenance
I could eat a peach all day
Published 25th May 2017
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Anonymous
25th May 2017 9:36pm
What a yummy treat this was!
25th May 2017 9:52pm
Thank you. It's a little outside my normal. Trying to push into new territory.
Anonymous
- Edited 26th May 2017 2:25am
26th May 2017 2:18am
I liked the wordplay in this Zach...not to mention it makes me recall what it's like to have my own fruit being picked and eaten...ltm....well done! Thank you for the find memories!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
26th May 2017 2:36am
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. May you make more fond memories real soon ;)
Anonymous
27th May 2017 1:01am
This is well written :)
27th May 2017 1:33am
