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Why did you take it?
You
You have my heart
You know where it is
You don't want to give it back
I need it
Can I get my heart
Can you give me it
Can you tell me where you hide it
Becuz I don't know
Why have you take it
How can I get it back
Can you please tell me it
Becuz I don't know
I want to know why
I want to know where
I want to know how
I want it back
Blondi
You have my heart
You know where it is
You don't want to give it back
I need it
Can I get my heart
Can you give me it
Can you tell me where you hide it
Becuz I don't know
Why have you take it
How can I get it back
Can you please tell me it
Becuz I don't know
I want to know why
I want to know where
I want to know how
I want it back
Blondi
Published 26th Aug 2011
| Edited 2nd Oct 2011
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26th Aug 2011 2:08pm
26th Aug 2011 2:12pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2011 11:48am
26th Aug 2011 2:29pm
Welcome to DU,
First one down looking forward to many more!
Nice!
A little note, because you asked...
This line "Why have you take it"
Try this "Why did you take it"
Enjoyed this very much, fun to read!
First one down looking forward to many more!
Nice!
A little note, because you asked...
This line "Why have you take it"
Try this "Why did you take it"
Enjoyed this very much, fun to read!
26th Aug 2011 2:37pm
26th Aug 2011 2:48pm
26th Aug 2011 2:56pm
26th Aug 2011 4:49pm
yea it's good i was gonna point that out too the whole why did you take it
26th Aug 2011 4:53pm
