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crying, while driving home very fast in the rain
i saw spaceships driving home tonight
lit up in the sky--in a place they shouldn't be
the left turn light turned green
and then yellow
so i left them
it was raining tonight
and as the lightning erupted
turning into the veins on your forehead
the sky became my favorite colors
and i waited and i waited
but they came less
the thunder stopped
and it turned quiet
and i knew
i'd never hear you laugh again
Published 15th Apr 2017
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15th Apr 2017 12:31pm
17th Apr 2017 8:39am
flying saucers headed home after intercepting your signal -
no love on the blue planet...
no love on the blue planet...
26th Dec 2017 12:30pm
I can imagine looking up at the sky with wonder
waiting to see what will happen next
lights lit up
strobe lights laughing
waving like grain in the breeze in the night
the wet
weighing me down
cracking of the sky
scores of cracks
Orchestra Cymbal's crashing
almost waking me from the dream
i saw beauty in your faces creases
lips lulling me into a slumber
the fog of my memories
grew thicker
quicker
than i could catch a cold
in the distance
i doubted i was sane
the clouds thinned
thawing ice
the calm came quietly
coaxing me into my own lies
i'd never hear you laugh again
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Amazing write Kameron
inspiring (obviously lol)
i Love the colors your painted
the ships soaring overhead
the thunder
and Love lost in a one lane road out of town
splendid poem, keep'em coming.
waiting to see what will happen next
lights lit up
strobe lights laughing
waving like grain in the breeze in the night
the wet
weighing me down
cracking of the sky
scores of cracks
Orchestra Cymbal's crashing
almost waking me from the dream
i saw beauty in your faces creases
lips lulling me into a slumber
the fog of my memories
grew thicker
quicker
than i could catch a cold
in the distance
i doubted i was sane
the clouds thinned
thawing ice
the calm came quietly
coaxing me into my own lies
i'd never hear you laugh again
-----------------------------------------------------------
Amazing write Kameron
inspiring (obviously lol)
i Love the colors your painted
the ships soaring overhead
the thunder
and Love lost in a one lane road out of town
splendid poem, keep'em coming.
