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Sweet Candy
I am going to fuck you nice and slow
Nobody has to know
We can keep on the download
I am going to take my time and do it right
Do it to your pussy it is tight
In and out stroking you back and forth
Like rowing a boat down the stream
Nobody can fuck you better than me
Tasting your pussy like a treat
You taste so sweet to me
Like some candy
Nobody has to know
We can keep on the download
I am going to take my time and do it right
Do it to your pussy it is tight
In and out stroking you back and forth
Like rowing a boat down the stream
Nobody can fuck you better than me
Tasting your pussy like a treat
You taste so sweet to me
Like some candy
Published 10th Apr 2017
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11th Apr 2017 7:19am
The Anglo Saxon invective does your verses a disservice - try working on original similes instead of using them as a dumping ground for "cool" words
11th Apr 2017 12:29pm
I have to agree with the comment above. The flow is in point. Choose your words wisely when you write. Outside of that, you do have potential!
