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Anonymous
8th Apr 2017 4:34pm
Jonni, your words truly carved themselves into me.
8th Apr 2017 6:15pm
Ouch !!
I've got some iodine and band-aids =P
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment Sunset
ALL the Best
jonni
18th Jul 2017 10:12pm
The imagery in this was beautiful. I couldn't help but imagine a man setting himself upon a sacrificial slab to cut out his own heart to feed whatever goddess caught his fancy.
Thanks for sharing,
EG
Thanks for sharing,
EG
Thanks Endless.
i'm very glad that you enjoyed this piece
it was written 4 years into a 10 year marriage
after which - we were finally free of each other
so, i do have a soft spot in my heart for this one
appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
ALL the Best
jonni
i'm very glad that you enjoyed this piece
it was written 4 years into a 10 year marriage
after which - we were finally free of each other
so, i do have a soft spot in my heart for this one
appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
ALL the Best
jonni
