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Unexpectedly(Boca Raton love)
I've learned to expect the unexpected I said to him
as he lay next to me
Here I am unexpected to be in this city,
He and I the two most unexpected people reaching the highest peak.
Emerged in the sensation of satisfaction unexpectedly!
as he lay next to me
Here I am unexpected to be in this city,
He and I the two most unexpected people reaching the highest peak.
Emerged in the sensation of satisfaction unexpectedly!
Published 20th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2011 3:23am
nothing less from you i love how things don't have to be so long to be so SEXY..
Short and sweet, I like the repetition of the word unexpected(ly). I also love the picture, where is that from? They have such a look of determination on their faces, as if to say, What, you got somthin to say? A nice compliment to a fine poem. I enjoyed it very much.
This kinda relationship is looked down upon big time. So I had to write about the difficulty of living back in the 1920s.
Anonymous
21st Aug 2011 4:31am
...we've grown to expect from you. Very nicely done in such a short work. Enjoyed.
tornado
tornado
24th Aug 2011 10:47pm
.......amazing. Minimalist but still so much said. Things one must think about. Excellent.
btw.....I'm from North Carolina and even in the 21st century, 2011, it's still looked down upon. But, I digress. I don't give a fuck!!!!!
btw.....I'm from North Carolina and even in the 21st century, 2011, it's still looked down upon. But, I digress. I don't give a fuck!!!!!
