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Adore erodA
You adore me
But I am still learning
The balance between
Complete passivity
And honest brutality
And I fear
I have marked you
With scars from
Both extremities.
Why do
You adore me,
My friend
But I am still learning
The balance between
Complete passivity
And honest brutality
And I fear
I have marked you
With scars from
Both extremities.
Why do
You adore me,
My friend
Published 28th Feb 2017
| Edited 13th Apr 2022
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14th May 2017 8:38pm
Wow this poem seriously got me because of a certain thing you said...
You adore me
But I am still learning
The balance between
Complete passivity
And honest brutality
And I fear
I have marked you
With scars from
Both extremities.
Why do
You adore me,
My friend
Which.. just wow.. great write! wtf lol
You adore me
But I am still learning
The balance between
Complete passivity
And honest brutality
And I fear
I have marked you
With scars from
Both extremities.
Why do
You adore me,
My friend
Which.. just wow.. great write! wtf lol
16th May 2017 8:43pm
