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fall
sit here, breathe, watch the world go by,
all seeing with my eyes closed,
the world drifts over me sitting on a tree trunk
- fallen, i fall, fool.
all seeing with my eyes closed,
the world drifts over me sitting on a tree trunk
- fallen, i fall, fool.
Published 18th Aug 2011
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18th Aug 2011 10:02am
simple truths are often best served small like this. it's a short piece but slow and easy, i like it a lot.
17th Nov 2011 1:15pm
thank you jes, yes it is simple. i prefer it that way. and thanks for actually clicking on it - these short ones can be read without clicking on em - lucky i ain't here for stats. but for what..?
18th Aug 2011 5:00pm
17th Nov 2011 1:15pm
thank you tip - it might be short but i still can't cast it to memory :/
