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Dark Desire
there’s a dragon’s fire in her words
unholy princess
friends warn me “she’ll take your innocence”
but I can’t help but stare
her eyeliner, so perfectly dark
pierced lip with tattoos
a choker cross accentuates her breast
oh lord, have mercy
her skin's as white as the snow
where did this creature come from?
she’s out of this world
maybe straight from the pits of hell?
it’s like she’s covered in an evil aura
I just want to get to know her better
afraid that she wouldn't play nice
I wouldn't mind being her offering
with each step toward miss magnificent
I feel the heavens trying to hold me back
but I can’t help it, she enchants me
so I decide to greet her…
“hi there!”
…“fuck off”
not as planned so I try again …
“what kind of music do you like?”
…“the fuck offs!”
she walks with her gorgeous vessel
leaving me with an unhappy ending
unholy princess
friends warn me “she’ll take your innocence”
but I can’t help but stare
her eyeliner, so perfectly dark
pierced lip with tattoos
a choker cross accentuates her breast
oh lord, have mercy
her skin's as white as the snow
where did this creature come from?
she’s out of this world
maybe straight from the pits of hell?
it’s like she’s covered in an evil aura
I just want to get to know her better
afraid that she wouldn't play nice
I wouldn't mind being her offering
with each step toward miss magnificent
I feel the heavens trying to hold me back
but I can’t help it, she enchants me
so I decide to greet her…
“hi there!”
…“fuck off”
not as planned so I try again …
“what kind of music do you like?”
…“the fuck offs!”
she walks with her gorgeous vessel
leaving me with an unhappy ending
Published 7th Feb 2017
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7th Feb 2017 3:20pm
7th Feb 2017 5:37pm
I think girls like that have a lot of mystery. Rather enticing. Thanks for reading!
10th Feb 2017 4:52am
First off... love that pic :-)
I like that you describe her as a creature from hell and then say that the heavens try to hold you back. There are more references to religion (offering) which made me think of the Garden of Eden and the attraction of the something dangerous/forbidden...
This is probably over analyzing... I hope I didn't ruin your poem ;-)
I like that you describe her as a creature from hell and then say that the heavens try to hold you back. There are more references to religion (offering) which made me think of the Garden of Eden and the attraction of the something dangerous/forbidden...
This is probably over analyzing... I hope I didn't ruin your poem ;-)
10th Feb 2017 7:36am
No over analyzing. It's supposed to come off like someone forbidden. Us boys like a bad girl from time to time 😉 Although they almost always break your heart!!! 😭 Thanks for enjoying, friend 🤗
