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My soul
All for me I have it whole
Won't I share it at all?
Piece for me, for you a part
Just to stay a bit apart
Half for me and half for you
Now I want to give and I do
All for you and none for me
And now it's yours, believe
Won't I share it at all?
Piece for me, for you a part
Just to stay a bit apart
Half for me and half for you
Now I want to give and I do
All for you and none for me
And now it's yours, believe
Published 26th Jan 2017
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26th Jan 2017 11:51am
OH wow!! This is great! Depending on the reader/writer context, it can be beautiful or devastating! Great poems can often have that effect!! Very cool, this way it connects with more readers! Nice work LanaW!!
27th Jan 2017 9:46am
It is a very beautiful piece of work
n would be a true honor I'm sure to the intended. :)
n would be a true honor I'm sure to the intended. :)
27th Jan 2017 12:18pm
