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The Forest Or The Trees?
Anywhere, Anyplace, Anytime
Licentious souls love to combine
Craving to compose silent songs
Two visual poems of unheard verse
In throws of passion merging their wish
The forest conceals the fetish
Creating harmony in one song
Drawn risqué lyrics to which two belong
Secretly they build a tree house high
Where only two love birds can fly
On metaphorical wings they rise
To a feather bed in their paradise
Yet it's what can't be seen by open eyes
Silent echos to all prying ears
Carving howls into the wood
Making love, the art of hidden display
Licentious souls love to combine
Craving to compose silent songs
Two visual poems of unheard verse
In throws of passion merging their wish
The forest conceals the fetish
Creating harmony in one song
Drawn risqué lyrics to which two belong
Secretly they build a tree house high
Where only two love birds can fly
On metaphorical wings they rise
To a feather bed in their paradise
Yet it's what can't be seen by open eyes
Silent echos to all prying ears
Carving howls into the wood
Making love, the art of hidden display
Published 15th Aug 2011
| Edited 23rd Sep 2024
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15th Aug 2011 1:29pm
I'm not sure that this qualifies as an erotic poem, but it's in there somewhere. I might classify it as a dark poem if it weren't about sex, but does every sex poem have to be overt?
Anonymous
16th Aug 2011 4:22am
What could be more erotic than sex with Satan? Lol. I always pictured the devil as a man, but I guess he could be anything he wants to appear as. Besides, he's a fallen angel and angels don't have sexual parts, or that's part of the myth I have read. I like that you decide to give into her temptations even after you realize who she is. That's definately erotic!
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11th Apr 2014 4:56pm
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18th Apr 2014 4:45am
Ahh, i just realized the confusion. I apparently changed the poem on this page at some point in the past after one or two people commented on it . I don't remember why, but i noticed it just now in the headings of the comments. The previous comments were on the other poem. This poem is about having sex in trees, lol. Not funny, but if you read the older comments, it probably makes you wonder what they were talking about. But thanks for reading and commenting... JJ
