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Thunder on the Mountain
rain shattered the dark silence
pelting on her
she loves the rain
the sound, the feel
a sense of cleansing
the soul
on top of the mountain,
a beautiful slab of stone
she lay down upon the coolness of it
letting the rain run in rivulets
across her body,
she closed her eyes,
she no longer felt the stone
beneath her,
just the sounds of rain
echoing on the mountains
the wind gathering her hair
and clothing,
the edge so close,
she waited, waited for the thunder
she was sure would come
pelting on her
she loves the rain
the sound, the feel
a sense of cleansing
the soul
on top of the mountain,
a beautiful slab of stone
she lay down upon the coolness of it
letting the rain run in rivulets
across her body,
she closed her eyes,
she no longer felt the stone
beneath her,
just the sounds of rain
echoing on the mountains
the wind gathering her hair
and clothing,
the edge so close,
she waited, waited for the thunder
she was sure would come
Published 24th Jan 2017
| Edited 25th Jan 2017
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25th Jan 2017 1:45am
I also have lost myself to the rain and waited for thunder. It's an experience like no other. Beautiful write :)
Willow
Willow
6th Feb 2017 2:29am
Thank you so much Willow ... for the read and thoughtful comments...greatly appreciated .... For the add to your RL ... humbled and honored .. ox
25th Jan 2017 10:54am
beautifully written atmospheric write - there's a storm coming is always a good metaphor :-)
cool ink :-)
cool ink :-)
6th Feb 2017 2:30am
30th Jan 2017 3:40pm
it's a long way down
but she's part of the wind & the rain;
serene among the thunders...
but she's part of the wind & the rain;
serene among the thunders...
6th Feb 2017 2:31am
Thank You so much JohnFeddeler ... for the read and beautiful comments ... much appreciated
