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things can jar...
we both liked
pickled eggs
until one day
it came to blows
you can have the
pickled eggs
I suppose...
Published 15th Jan 2017
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15th Jan 2017 2:02am
The ending has me wondering if giving up the pickled eggs is a concession in hopes that the other person will part with something else?
15th Jan 2017 2:04am
15th Jan 2017 3:04am
Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 3:33pm
before the egg gets to be pickled... it must be hard boiled, right? ;)
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16th Jan 2017 6:32pm
I would rather eat toe cheese than a pickled egg - tell her she can have mine too :-p
