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Stalwart bodies & the reckoning
Wrapped in sunset longing, purple velvets line pale pink cotton
chiffons distant offerings kiss each edge with lattice patchwork
pooling my thoughts and body deep into womb-like satin fabric
it was addressed, acknowledged, with affluent conciliation
give with each hand, watching as the tide rolls in, dark
full roar, trimmed forth next to froth
receiving laminous salts
bathed deep to my flush and supple skin
where rage for the possible seeps, cracked like the egg
from under
letting magma spill, heat of protoplasmic entities...
and the world is awash...
with color,
eminence
groomed by natures veracity
absolute
and
perfect
Published 2nd Jan 2017
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2nd Jan 2017 9:40pm
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2nd Jan 2017 10:36pm
Many thanks Dear Queen!!!
Maybe one day i'll have it in picture form...sadly my pc is fighting tooth and nail....god i need a mac!!!
Maybe one day i'll have it in picture form...sadly my pc is fighting tooth and nail....god i need a mac!!!
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2017 9:44pm
Would you stop writing in such eloquence, my RL is getting filled with your masterpieces lol
I have no idea what the title means but i love the poem and honestly i really like this form more, much more than placed in the image, but that's just me and you know me ;)
I have no idea what the title means but i love the poem and honestly i really like this form more, much more than placed in the image, but that's just me and you know me ;)
2nd Jan 2017 10:41pm
Speaking of Mac people lol
Thank You Babe so Very much!!!
Its not so eloquent as it is the rearranging of the same words i tend to fancy ;)
I prefer this form....maybe it'll be easier to just make a brand new pic from this form instead of fighting my pc over the current file-type.
but...it wont be today lol
and You know how often i revisit my Writes for revision....hahaha
Thank You Babe so Very much!!!
Its not so eloquent as it is the rearranging of the same words i tend to fancy ;)
I prefer this form....maybe it'll be easier to just make a brand new pic from this form instead of fighting my pc over the current file-type.
but...it wont be today lol
and You know how often i revisit my Writes for revision....hahaha
11th Jan 2017 10:17pm
So many delicious words in this construction! My favorite: "letting magma spill, heat of protoplasmic entities...
and the world is awash...
with color,
eminence"
and the world is awash...
with color,
eminence"
16th Jan 2017 2:26pm
No matter when or where. When I hear the word....I think of Townshend lol
16th Jan 2017 3:18pm
16th Jan 2017 8:18pm
warmed me from within with the fire in the lines. This poem reminds me of the colour palette, enigmatic blues and purples fade into voracious reds and oranges. Stunning.
20th Jan 2017 5:48pm
Thank You DP!!! Colours of the earth -strike the core!!! Appreciate You!!!
21st Jan 2017 4:29am
I want to enwrapp'd my self
as a whole within:
Every line
Every broken breathless pattern between.. .
How I adore.. . the beauty you extend
-Howlings
as a whole within:
Every line
Every broken breathless pattern between.. .
How I adore.. . the beauty you extend
-Howlings
21st Jan 2017 4:35am
You humble me Dear Howling!!! Your kindness, intelligence and support swell my head- Thank You for being here!!!
Anonymous
10th Feb 2017 5:12am
A true canvas indeed.
The colors mentioned remind me of cotton candy heaven;)
Beautiful colors, so very delicate....you want to envelope yourself into such beauty and embrace every moment.
So..very lovely.
The colors mentioned remind me of cotton candy heaven;)
Beautiful colors, so very delicate....you want to envelope yourself into such beauty and embrace every moment.
So..very lovely.
11th Feb 2017 5:21am
This was written on a sailors morning- hence the cotton candy colours lol I'm glad You felt it!!!
