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Regret
She doesn't want me
Anymore
You wanted me
Last night
Twice
Celebration
Turned to fornication
Out of town
Desperate
Secret
Now it's morning
Packing
Mind racing
Trying to erase
Regret
Still sleeping
You lay there sprawled
On white sheets
A Beauty
Beauty
I stare
In awe at dried cum
Your pussy
In my mind
Flawless
You awake
To me exploring
One more regret
Before I go
Ravenous
She doesn't want me
Anymore
Like You
Want me
Now
Anymore
You wanted me
Last night
Twice
Celebration
Turned to fornication
Out of town
Desperate
Secret
Now it's morning
Packing
Mind racing
Trying to erase
Regret
Still sleeping
You lay there sprawled
On white sheets
A Beauty
Beauty
I stare
In awe at dried cum
Your pussy
In my mind
Flawless
You awake
To me exploring
One more regret
Before I go
Ravenous
She doesn't want me
Anymore
Like You
Want me
Now
Published 10th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2011 7:34pm
Basically a good poem; you use words sparely so it reads well. You need to practice other forms of poetry....a little more words....because somehow
...it felt unfinished.
...it felt unfinished.
Anonymous
12th Aug 2011 4:45am
I really enjoyed this,great job!
