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smile
one of the billion things i love about you
is that when you smile you are breathtaking
if you smiled everywhere you went you would own the world
of all the things i wish were true
and believed i could never give to you
the answer was before me all the while
all i need to do is make you smile
At the risk of boring ya's, I only post on DU so I'd like to repost some of my writes that have been punctuated and in some cases changed completely. Feel free to pass over the ones already read. Should only take a few days. Thanks for your patience.
Twitch
is that when you smile you are breathtaking
if you smiled everywhere you went you would own the world
of all the things i wish were true
and believed i could never give to you
the answer was before me all the while
all i need to do is make you smile
At the risk of boring ya's, I only post on DU so I'd like to repost some of my writes that have been punctuated and in some cases changed completely. Feel free to pass over the ones already read. Should only take a few days. Thanks for your patience.
Twitch
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