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Like the East loves the West
I love you like the East loves the West.
they might be half the world apart but she still sends the sun on a day's journey away to tell him she's thinking of him.
I dont do it all the time. i dont know how to. i dont have the sun to give to you, nor the moon and stars. all i have are floppy words bouncing on pages, hoping to pour to you how much i adore you, then suddenly feeling they're inadequate and tearing them up before they reach you. im sorry. all i have are my stories, badly written, badly told, but eager to be heard by you. lOL,...i was trying to be poetic but i can't reach that. It requires me to be graceful, but all grace leaves me when im around you. will you take awkward me? I dont know how else to say it. Nigga i love you.
they might be half the world apart but she still sends the sun on a day's journey away to tell him she's thinking of him.
I dont do it all the time. i dont know how to. i dont have the sun to give to you, nor the moon and stars. all i have are floppy words bouncing on pages, hoping to pour to you how much i adore you, then suddenly feeling they're inadequate and tearing them up before they reach you. im sorry. all i have are my stories, badly written, badly told, but eager to be heard by you. lOL,...i was trying to be poetic but i can't reach that. It requires me to be graceful, but all grace leaves me when im around you. will you take awkward me? I dont know how else to say it. Nigga i love you.
Published 29th Nov 2016
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29th Nov 2016 7:55pm
You did it, you said it. Sometimes it's so hard to articulate. I understand the effort of the one written of and wrote about it in "Too Shy To Say I Love You". She can't say it either. Your work is a confirmation that others feel what you describe. Keep writing.
30th Nov 2016 7:53am
6th Dec 2016 7:36pm
Now that's some truth that needed to be spoken
Always easier to be brave on paper
Always easier to be brave on paper
