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Looking for something
Looking deep inside
Asking why does death hurt
Taken from the struggle
To a place of peace
Is it peace we search for
Or a broken dream of
What we should be
And what we really are
Death is more than pain
For me I suppose
The struggle is through
Homeward bound are the lucky
Taken from me and you
Asking why does death hurt
Taken from the struggle
To a place of peace
Is it peace we search for
Or a broken dream of
What we should be
And what we really are
Death is more than pain
For me I suppose
The struggle is through
Homeward bound are the lucky
Taken from me and you
Published 25th Nov 2016
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28th Nov 2016 3:35am
Homeward bound....wow. Yeah, I would agree with that. It's hard for the living to comprehend a peaceful place waiting for us but I believe there is.
Nicely written. (I think some punctuation would help in this but it's just a suggestion).
Nicely written. (I think some punctuation would help in this but it's just a suggestion).
