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4: 1: My Intangible Love

Excerpt 1 from Journal 4:  'Tears of Ash'
  -From 'Journals To My True Love, Part 1'

My Love, I know you not,
  yet I taste you in the
  moments of stillness...

In the air, cold with vacancy
  does my hearts fire burn
  and consume it...

In this empty room void of decoration
  do thoughts of you dance and
  and add color and depth...

In the lightness of my steps do I feel
  the weight not of myself
  but of your existence...

In my own eyes do I see mirrored
  your struggles and joys
  as mine...

In the mystery and intangibility of you
  whom I do not yet know
  do I see form...

In my heart are you embedded and trapped
  and yet not with a name
  to call yourself...
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