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under the covers
Under the covers
The warmth, the curves, the rising
And the falling, entice;
I grips you, seeking
To contain need completely
In this glutinous,
Moist and needy sex
That spreads on command, but will
Tighten and respond
Very readily
To you as you find me hot
Under the covers
The warmth, the curves, the rising
And the falling, entice;
I grips you, seeking
To contain need completely
In this glutinous,
Moist and needy sex
That spreads on command, but will
Tighten and respond
Very readily
To you as you find me hot
Under the covers
Published 20th Jul 2016
| Edited 19th May 2019
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- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
20th Jul 2016 4:03am
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20th Jul 2016 9:15am
20th Jul 2016 8:22am
I like the start with its sense of erotic anticipation. I was not sure about the use of the word 'glutinous' which suggests something sticky and heavy.
20th Jul 2016 9:13am
Perhaps need can be sticky and heavy in certain dependency situations. S.O.
21st Jul 2016 8:57pm
...when passion and desire under the covers stain sheets with love's residue, makes sunrise all the more beautiful to wake up to.
Sexy~
Sexy~
21st Jul 2016 9:15pm
1st Feb 2018 8:19pm
Seductively erotic in it's brevity. Just the right length to capture the moment.
2nd Feb 2018 9:18am
