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For you,my love (Go to hell)
Are you comfortable,my love
Upon your untouchable
Throne of lies?
Do you feel any sorrow
For the pretty tears
In my eyes?
Unfeeling animal
Thrower of heavy stones
And of hate
I take pitty of your hideouse heart
And wish you
A fitting fate
Your day of judgement
Has come
Oh,my sweet
May the flames of Hades
Be always nipping
At the heels of your feet
Run swift,my love
Leap down from
Your mighty throne
I wish you godspeed
May hell's inferno
Be your permanent home
Upon your untouchable
Throne of lies?
Do you feel any sorrow
For the pretty tears
In my eyes?
Unfeeling animal
Thrower of heavy stones
And of hate
I take pitty of your hideouse heart
And wish you
A fitting fate
Your day of judgement
Has come
Oh,my sweet
May the flames of Hades
Be always nipping
At the heels of your feet
Run swift,my love
Leap down from
Your mighty throne
I wish you godspeed
May hell's inferno
Be your permanent home
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Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
16th Jul 2016 7:23am
Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
16th Jul 2016 9:58am
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16th Jul 2016 10:03am
Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
21st Jul 2016 7:00pm
Though it's definitely not the writing style I'd prefer, it is nonetheless powerful in every word and the addressee will get the message. Well done. :-)
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22nd Jul 2016 2:51am
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2nd Aug 2016 10:14pm
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3rd Aug 2016 00:29am
Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
5th Aug 2016 9:48am
Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
5th Aug 2016 9:56am
Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
6th Aug 2016 6:44am
The title as a singular just sent me wandering
my lady.. .it sounds gorgeous, sweet, and loving'..
...then surprise meant [Go to hell] ;)
I know of this very well love, and sometimes we
get fed-up.. Ha! good ridden
Love your force here
-Howlings
my lady.. .it sounds gorgeous, sweet, and loving'..
...then surprise meant [Go to hell] ;)
I know of this very well love, and sometimes we
get fed-up.. Ha! good ridden
Love your force here
-Howlings
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Re. For you,my love (Go to hell)
6th Aug 2016 6:53am