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Hieroglyphs of our love
If I was a poet
I would have effortlessly
conceived of the words
to conquer your heart.
And compose sentences
so you can know mine
I would capture
drops of thoughts
and mix it with the ancient
hieroglyphs of our love
I would paint a tranquil beach,
a deep blue sea,
then I would steal the secrets
of your heart to carve it out
in our tree, next to mine
I would have effortlessly
conceived of the words
to conquer your heart.
And compose sentences
so you can know mine
I would capture
drops of thoughts
and mix it with the ancient
hieroglyphs of our love
I would paint a tranquil beach,
a deep blue sea,
then I would steal the secrets
of your heart to carve it out
in our tree, next to mine
Published 20th Jul 2011
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21st Jul 2011 9:17pm
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21st Jul 2011 10:29pm
Thank you... It came from my heart and its more a hope...or a dream for his love to be only mine that its really reality...'n versigting, begeerte...
25th Jul 2011 6:57am
wow I cant like this enough lol I wish there was a multiple like button or something amazing work as always. thank you for publishing it incredible work!!!
25th Jul 2011 8:14pm
Thanx Inaya:) been a bit hectic here at my side. And still about a week left... Wanted to reply back to u... Will do so next week. Hope u have been doing well?
25th Feb 2014 5:51am
Hmmm.... pure drivvle! Loose ended sentence structure, broken-incoherent grammar
8th Mar 2014 8:15pm
Uhmm... Thank you O great and wise one for the VERY DESTRUCTIVE feedback?? Because obviously EVERYONE on here can't wait to be broken down and stepped on by you... Asshole!!!
