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no cure
i've finally found
the one thing
eating a pizza
won't cure
it starts with an h
and ends with an e
it rhymes with partake
it's nothing
but heartache
and it's killing me
the one thing
eating a pizza
won't cure
it starts with an h
and ends with an e
it rhymes with partake
it's nothing
but heartache
and it's killing me
Published 2nd Jul 2016
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2nd Jul 2016 7:56pm
heartache brings you growth... makes a poet, don't you know it... True love will come in an most unusual way
10th Aug 2016 00:57am
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. You made me smile.
By the way, welcome to DUP.
By the way, welcome to DUP.
3rd Jul 2016 11:36am
I really like this! Its simple and straight to the point. I hope that you will take my remark as a compliment. Your style is different from many poets here on DUP including myself...and I must say that I really enjoyed that difference.
Thank you for your wonderful remarks and for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. You made my heart smile.
Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 11:57pm
Nope, there's no cure for heartache. I like the thought that pizza will cure just about anything else.
10th Aug 2016 00:54am
10th Aug 2016 00:58am
Short, sweet, cute! Good read. The pizza reference seems to take a bit of the sting away from the heartache. That's unique. I like it.
