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Quantum Quandary
She fell down.
Down from the stars,
the day we met.
She illuminated me,
every fold in my skin,
every wrinkle in my soul.
Now my time has passed.
She doesn't exist,
not anymore.
Down from the stars,
the day we met.
She illuminated me,
every fold in my skin,
every wrinkle in my soul.
Now my time has passed.
She doesn't exist,
not anymore.
Published 15th Jun 2016
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15th Jun 2016 11:26pm
It's too early in the morning for me to try and understand what or who you were writing about dfwtinman but I really like these words especially the 2nd stanza...
It is quite beautiful in its apparent simplicity but I feel there are many layers if one cares to look... :)
It is quite beautiful in its apparent simplicity but I feel there are many layers if one cares to look... :)
15th Jun 2016 11:46pm
18th Jun 2016 3:18am
The first stanza really stands out to me. I knew a girl when I was in high school just like that. Sadly time and distant mad us drift further away.
Very quandary indeed.
Very quandary indeed.
