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blue/green waves
now if you die
come see me
we'll hitch a ride
green-tipped blue waves
the sky is a reflection
we're crouching in caves
you don't say a word
you take it like a man
after all you've seen & heard
we don't wanna talk about it
so we just sit with our thousand yard stares
it might be time we got out of each others' hair
come see me
we'll hitch a ride
green-tipped blue waves
the sky is a reflection
we're crouching in caves
you don't say a word
you take it like a man
after all you've seen & heard
we don't wanna talk about it
so we just sit with our thousand yard stares
it might be time we got out of each others' hair
Published 27th May 2016
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28th May 2016 8:48am
I love your style of concise poetry. As Thomas Jefferson said, “The most valuable of all talents is that of never using two words when one will do.”
28th May 2016 3:00pm
Thank you! That's a huge compliment to me. Yeah, honestly, it just reflects the way I speak. I'm not someone who talks a lot, normally, but when I do I try to get to the point. No reason to beat around the proverbial bush, really. Thanks again!
