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The rose doesn't give up the battle

A rose so dim at night
but day never bright.
A fight stay unwon-
Could I ever say "I'm done!"?

My petals are overdew.
Long time they grew!
And now a broken flower...
That is what you made me to be!
Written by poedelkietjie
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