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Disturbing
He turned the music up loud
and she danced along to the beat
of his fists
it disturbed the neighbours
but they still ignored it
Published 22nd May 2016
| Edited 6th Sep 2016
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Anonymous
22nd May 2016 1:46am
This is really sad. Gives men a bad name. :-(
22nd May 2016 1:57am
I posted it under 'dark' because it can be read that way but it has multiple meanings as it is a wordplay piece :-)
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd May 2016 2:15am
22nd May 2016 2:06am
I only read this one way honey. I don't think he was dancing your tune somehow.
22nd May 2016 2:49am
22nd May 2016 9:10am
Damn, that was a well creative way to voice domestic violence. And how sad is it in this day and age for people to 'mind their business' when a crime is being committed?!
Thanks for sharing this, Sky!
Thanks for sharing this, Sky!
22nd May 2016 3:50pm
The term, 'Bunny boiler' was derived from the film Fatal Attraction Rain. Meaning a stalker, killer type personality.
22nd May 2016 2:34pm
It's amazing to me how often this happens and nobody intervenes. Good write, rough subject
Willow
Willow
22nd May 2016 3:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
22nd May 2016 3:11pm
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