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'End Of Mind...'
Asesinar a mi hermosa
cortar la aorta a una de cuatro caras
cámara que es una vía
a tu casa ...
Matar a mí oscuro,
apagar las llamas del infierno ti
que amenaza la incineración de un todo ...
asesinarme más
disociar la esencia de bein '
n 'arrojará el que la belleza que murió
conmigo...
Translation:
*
Murder me beautiful
slice the aorta to a four-sided
chamber that's a pathway
to thy home...
Murder me dark,
douse the flames of thee inferno
that threatens incineration of a whole...
Murder me more
disassociate the essence of bein'
n' cast away that beauty that died
within me...*
cortar la aorta a una de cuatro caras
cámara que es una vía
a tu casa ...
Matar a mí oscuro,
apagar las llamas del infierno ti
que amenaza la incineración de un todo ...
asesinarme más
disociar la esencia de bein '
n 'arrojará el que la belleza que murió
conmigo...
Translation:
*
Murder me beautiful
slice the aorta to a four-sided
chamber that's a pathway
to thy home...
Murder me dark,
douse the flames of thee inferno
that threatens incineration of a whole...
Murder me more
disassociate the essence of bein'
n' cast away that beauty that died
within me...*
Published 20th May 2016
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20th May 2016 5:43pm
Dammit, you blow it outa the ballpark in english now you post in spanish!
I don't know what this poem is about lol but I'm impressed :p
I don't know what this poem is about lol but I'm impressed :p
20th May 2016 5:50pm
Lol aaawww well just for u I will add the English version :) thank u my dear :)
20th May 2016 6:04pm
20th May 2016 6:08pm
21st May 2016 1:38am
I like the way this poem disturbs my brain cells; you've made something so morbid and dark, feel so beautiful.
21st May 2016 1:48am
Anonymous
21st May 2016 3:56am
Hey Poet.....always awesome......glad you posted the English with it......I didn't know a word of it but knew it was good casue you wrote it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st May 2016 9:53am
Anonymous
21st May 2016 3:43pm
yeah.... I was getting ready to translate before further I looked...
Beautiful that of comprehension to that of the minds shackles to be freed.
Beautiful that of comprehension to that of the minds shackles to be freed.
21st May 2016 9:25pm
22nd May 2016 8:23am
A haunting piece...such dire sadness conveyed so beautifully. Love this Poetik, LR X
22nd May 2016 10:53am
22nd May 2016 9:24am
This was beautifully written Rich, but even with the translation I couldn't grasp it's meaning. Maybe because it's 3:24 am here, and my ass need to be in the bed....
22nd May 2016 10:57am
My sweet Tara, none know lack of sleep more than fellow depraved lol... I can sum it up for you though very quickly... It's a call to ' kill the feelings of love' inside, become cold...dead.
Is it like ... love pierced me in the heart, or, love you to the core..... ? In any case it sounds elegant . like it
p.s. just noticed the above post. oops
p.s. just noticed the above post. oops
26th May 2016 3:47am
Aaawww technically you're on the right track...cause n effect... thank u my sweetheart, I sure have missed hearing from you... Thank you so much! :)
21st Jul 2016 9:28am
This touched me in more ways than I would like to admit...
But I applaud your tantalizing text and your ability to ensnare emotional contact. Loved it
-Stone
But I applaud your tantalizing text and your ability to ensnare emotional contact. Loved it
-Stone
21st Jul 2016 11:31pm
I love you for admitting something you'd rather not...that truly shows strength of character... I'm honored. Truly :)
