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Ball of String
Life unravles like a ball of string
Rolling down a hill
The ball gets smaller as it rolls
like a runaway wheel
It makes a trail of where you've been
Places that you've seen
Connects the beginning to the end
And everything between
Published 12th Jul 2011
| Edited 14th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2011 9:53pm
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27th Jul 2011 11:38pm
this is such a simple, yet intricate piece- it's a universal story with a million threads
nice work :)
nice work :)
2nd Aug 2011 8:33am
Anonymous
4th Aug 2011 3:10pm
very much enjoyed!
20th Feb 2012 4:21am
