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REVERIE
I want to search deeper into your soul,
deeper and deeper still
I want to search ardently
for every facet
in the sanctuary of your humanness
and make it mine
I want to conquer you;
I want to feel you
like delicate raindrops
steadily falling on my face
I want to believe again
in being a child
innocent, hopeful and wide-eyed
to live a life of careless abandon...
Even if it’s elusive and
only
temporary.
deeper and deeper still
I want to search ardently
for every facet
in the sanctuary of your humanness
and make it mine
I want to conquer you;
I want to feel you
like delicate raindrops
steadily falling on my face
I want to believe again
in being a child
innocent, hopeful and wide-eyed
to live a life of careless abandon...
Even if it’s elusive and
only
temporary.
Published 9th Jul 2011
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2011 4:39pm
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13th Jul 2011 11:53am
Thanx Tammy, not nearly as good as yours so getting a compliment like this from you means a lot to me!
Anonymous
13th Jul 2011 11:46am
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13th Jul 2011 11:57am
Thank you Gabriel,
I try and find words for what I feel or experience that others might relate to. So getting feedback like this means I am doing something right. :)
Such kind words! :)
Thank you again!
I try and find words for what I feel or experience that others might relate to. So getting feedback like this means I am doing something right. :)
Such kind words! :)
Thank you again!
