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Death Of Romance
Stubborn souls not giving in
There is no light,no way to win
Hoping for hope
When there is none
Always stressing is no fun
Need relief from this
Pain that lies deep within
Searching for answers
That consumes my reality
Engrossed at the moment
Pondering all things in between
Will I ever get relief from
This burden upon my heart
Because I surely do not want to depart
There is no light,no way to win
Hoping for hope
When there is none
Always stressing is no fun
Need relief from this
Pain that lies deep within
Searching for answers
That consumes my reality
Engrossed at the moment
Pondering all things in between
Will I ever get relief from
This burden upon my heart
Because I surely do not want to depart
Published 2nd Apr 2016
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2nd Apr 2016 10:22pm
Poem is good but I feel like something is missing like there is more you want to say
29th May 2016 5:20pm
Hey Simon thanks ,maybe in my next few writes I will finish what I need to say .cheers to ya
4th Apr 2016 10:21pm
Awe SC.......true romance is always alive within you......sadness that accompanies it often our own minds imaginations......I've been they this......at times it's hard to keep believing......regardless of hard times or how good the relationship is......there are smiles and there are tears......hang in there......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Hey flower girl. There good times and bad ones in a relationship if there is not you must be living in the land of make believe. With love there is much to gain despite the tears and the pain. One day soon the sun will finally lift and help cleanse all things away . Hugs to you and happy oceans sc
